by Hannah, 9, Switzerland
There once was a land with a mystery to be solved. The mystery of the red ruby rescue. So, the best chief came from a faraway country. She came because Annabelle needed the best of the best to solve the mystery. The chief was the head of all chiefs. She came from a town called Moran in a country called Bunland. This is how it all happened: Annabelle is a very nice kind lady. She invited some of her friends for dinner and their names were Olivia, Chelsea, Kayla and Dora and one of them is the bandit. Annabelle knew this because the Ruby Red Pen was stolen during the time of the dinner.
“Who was it, Chief?” Detective Mora asked.
“You have to talk to the suspects”, said the Chief.
Detective Mora asked the guests many questions about what they were doing, how they knew each other, and what happened at the dinner party, as the Chief listened. They all said almost the same thing except Dora. Dora said that Detective Mora came to the dinner party last night. The Chief thought it was not possible because Mora was supposed to have been working on another project. So that was fascinating. The
Chief and Detective Mora searched for clues and the Chief watched Detective More closely. They found a white piece of fabric in
the safe where the red ruby pen was stolen from. The Chief then found a card with the word “Tornado” on it, which
was on top of the safe.
“The Tornado has struck again!” said the Chief.
The Chief thought the card was a joke, left there as a prank. She took Detective Mora off the job because she thought it was too dangerous, and she took the case into her own hands. She started the search again. She looked in the same places, and she found the solution. The Chief knew who the Tornado Bandit was. Mora owned a white scarf matching the white piece of fabric. Mora was at the party last night. The chief handcuffed her and put her into jail. In her pocket was the Red Ruby Pen. Everyone except Mora lived happily ever after.
Hannah is 9 and loves to read adventure stories with all types of characters: people, animals, or objects come to life. She writes adventure stories too, as well as creative non-fiction about her life.
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